Friday 13 March 2015

colour poem

yellow is the sun it feels like i am melting help help.
yellow is the taste of melted cheese on pizza.
yellow is sound of a basketball  bouncing
yellow is the look of chips yum yum
yellow is smell of sunflowers in spring
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  1. Unknown1 April 2015 at 10:14

    Hi kaleb
    I liked how you described what yellow feels like to you.to me yellow feels like hot sand on Your feet.that was a awesome piece of writing

    From Ella

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  2. Unknown1 April 2015 at 10:14

    Hi kaleb
    I liked how you described what yellow feels like to you.to me yellow feels like hot sand on Your feet.that was a awesome piece of writing

    From Ella

    ReplyDelete
  3. Unknown15 May 2015 at 10:19

    Hi Kaleb Yellow reminds me of ice-cream soda on a hot day.

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