Thursday 19 March 2015

squirrel story

dear mum and dad

I had a tiring day from running away I was in the forest looking for acorns . But I sawed a horck I   feel scared . I started running away it chased  me I ran to nana nest i heard i braking in it broke in to the nest. I fulled to the ground I started running I went up a tree an just sawed a hole at the over side I jumped across to the aver side. I felt like I flyed  across I made it I went in the hole in the old tree. I found acorns in the tree i had a snack and a sleep because I was tired.
love son kaleb  
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  1. Unknown15 May 2015 at 09:44

    well done kaleb i like the part where you could hear the halk breaking in.but make sure your spelling is correct

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  2. Izzy rm 18 TeMata2 June 2015 at 11:31

    Nice story I like it how it is about a squirrel
    where did you get the idea ?

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  3. George rm18 T Mata2 June 2015 at 11:36

    A nice simple story bet are you squirrel or a human?

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